spring break

I went to the coast with my girl friend and her parents. While we were there we went to a bunch of antique stores in Lincoln city. Also we went to Newport for lunch and then we went the the light house and climbed it. Then we went back to her beach house and played a bunch of games . Also we went out eat at Mo's and Mcminnimes and came back to Salem.

sentence correcting

1. Lorraine moved to a new school. correct
2. I was scared of the ghost at first.
3. It was hard for me to meet new people.
4. Lorraine's new lab partner is Janeese. correct
5. Janeese read an exciting book. correct
6. The name of the main character was Tracy.
7. The teenage character was Janeese.
8. I told Lorraine about the book I read.

Freedom

I think freedom is when your allowed to do what ever you want but nothing illegal. For example in prison you don't get to do anything but for a reason. Another example would have to be when you turn 18 because there's no curfew. Also why should drafts be able to make you go to war if you don't want to.

My Favorite Person

My favorite person would have to be my girl friend. Her name is Lindsey and she is so great. She has pushed me and pushed me to get my G.E.D and I'm finally getting it. Also she has done so much for me. She has gotten me to stop hanging out with my friends because they're doing bad things. Also my mom loves her and so do I. When i first met her I loved everything about her. What I love the most about here is her smile and her eyes. the way she looks at me is unbelievable. Also she is a graduate from McKay, she is really funny, she has blondish brownish hair. She works at sears and we love going to the the coast. We have been together for 7 almost 8 months.

sentence errors

1. The tiger in the movie look fierce. fierce.
2. The test had extra credit questions. questions.
3. Did you ask for more candy? ask.
4. The art museum is filled with famous paintings. famous.
5. How many people take a bus to work? people.
6. The president will give a speech. president.
7. Marianna wants to become a dancer. dancer.
8. A tour guide will point out all the city's monuments. point.
9. The music was too loud to hear Kim speak. speak.
10. Do any children have to be taken home? children.
11. We were all asleep when the alarm woke us. when.

Barbie"s

I think that Barbie Dolls are good and bad . I think there good for little kids and their parents because when they take their kids to the doctors they have something to keep them occupied. Their bad because some of the Barbies are made with lead or mercury and some little kids put them in there mouths.

I think the people get there beliefs from real life situations.
Why would some one just make up horrible story's like the ones we read.
Also some people do go through those situations where they loose someone or go threw a bunch of stuff that they shouldn't have.
I think those story's are true because every one has gone through tough times.